on Her
Her hair falls like heavy smoke-
But when the wind blows through her, it flies
mysteriously, like a stream that passes through the
forest night.
Her eyes are dark and endless wells,
Filled to the brim with a cool, fearful, and awakening
water, reared by the pristine hills of the
Himalayas.
Her hands unfold her untold tales;
Like a mist-enfolded dancer, they are invisible,
yet let their deep vibrations
be felt.
Her skin emits a restless tone
That numbs, and erodes my mind so completely,
as though from a deep and
divine flute.
And now, though i do not see her, feel her, hear her-
She still runs madly through treesin my dream.
But when the wind blows through her, it flies
mysteriously, like a stream that passes through the
forest night.
Her eyes are dark and endless wells,
Filled to the brim with a cool, fearful, and awakening
water, reared by the pristine hills of the
Himalayas.
Her hands unfold her untold tales;
Like a mist-enfolded dancer, they are invisible,
yet let their deep vibrations
be felt.
Her skin emits a restless tone
That numbs, and erodes my mind so completely,
as though from a deep and
divine flute.
And now, though i do not see her, feel her, hear her-
She still runs madly through treesin my dream.
7 Comments:
Wow! Nice similes, especially, "Her eyes are dark and endless wells, ...Himalayas." You've taken the somewhat conventional simile and made it really beautiful!
Also loved "Her hands unfold her untold tales;
Like a mist-enfolded dancer,". And the skin emitting a tone thing. And the beginning. Well, everything! :D
I assume it's about a Goddess?
thank you... didnt think anyone'd read that thing ever...
goddess?
naaa.... its this girl i had an intense crush on but never got to say it to... wat can i say...im a sucker for indecission..
Aww... tragic love story! Love the kind! :D
Just the whole capital 'h' in the title that made me think she must be a goddess or something!
u like tragedy huh? well then it gets better... this girl started going out wid my best friend who humoured me while all the time secretly working his smooth-talking tongue on her....
they still together.. happy as hell.. im over it, but once tragedy bites, it leaves fang marks or a case of rabies that only the worst bitches possess..
ummm.. yeah...
hope they dont read this..
Ah. That IS pretty tragic. I'm sure it wouldn't be much fun to live a tragic love story, huh? Anyway, at least a lot of beautiful poetry comes out of tragedy (hint, hint). Not that that's any consolation...
awww.... thanksa bunch... means a lot... guess now there's a reason to get depressed... but there's one good thing as they say that comes out of being way down in the pits.... cant get any lower!
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